Rewrote 4 sentence abstract. Looked at project timelines and provided feedback. The key points are:
- Enough detail to see the tasks that need to be completed to achieve the outcome.
- Make them like bar graph so you can fill in your progress and easily see where you are up to.
- Be aware of what things require other things to be done first, and order appropriately,
- And conversely be aware of what could be done simultaenously.
Discussed collaboration project with meanwhile.